In psychological writing (and writing in many other disciplines), the reader assumes you are using your own words and sentence structures. Thus, even when discussing someone else's ideas, the reader still assumes that you wrote your own unique sentences (even if you include citations). Doing otherwise, then, is implicitly trying to take credit for someone else's work.
Also in psychological writing, you are typically explaining or defending a point by using evidence gathered by other authors - often multiple authors. Because the ultimate point you want to make is not dependent on the particular wordings those other authors used, the entire paper you write needs to be in your own words - even in those places where you are discussing someone else's research.
Paraphrasing or using more than a few direction quotations interferes with the "flow" of your own writing. It is often difficult for the reader to see how those other, paraphrased or quoted, ideas fit with your broader discussion because they have not read the same source material you have.
Thus, in psychological writing, paraphrasing is considered bad writing practice. If you reach a point where you feel the particular wording another author used is important to your point - that is one of the rare places where you should use a direct quotation (and, as with all information that you learn from another source, include a citation).
Avoid the (common) tendency to paraphrase by closing all books and sources before beginning to write your paper (or a section of it). If you need to refer back to a source to get a detail, or double-check that you are accurately using the information, do so via revision after writing about the source using your own words.
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USEFUL EXAMPLE courtesy of Professor Paul C. Smith
Paraphrasing, in the sense that most people do it,
is, essentially, plagiarism. When you use information
from a source, the goal is to put it entirely in your own words, in the larger
context of YOUR paper. Most direct paraphrasing (that is, substituting,
deleting or re-arranging words from the original work) is obvious to the
readers of a paper because it does not fit with the overall flow of YOUR
work. Below is an example of what constitutes
inappropriate paraphrasing versus appropriate use of a source.
Here
is an example paragraph from a source:
"Long-term memory, that immensely complex
storehouse, has also been most extensively
studied with the use of verbal materials, usually presented in the form of long lists. As we shall see, this
approach has resulted in some extremely important findings, but it has also been
a bit misleading. After all, remembering lists of words is somewhat
different from remembering a conversation, a recipe, or the plot of a
movie" (Klatsky, 1975, p.17).
Here
is an inappropriate paraphrase:
Long
term memory is a complex storehouse that has been studied extensively using verbal materials presented in the form of
long lists. While this approach has resulted in some important findings,
it has been misleading. Remembering a list is not like remembering a
discussion or a movie (Klatsky, 1975).
Here
is an appropriate summary of that information to be included in a paper:
Researchers usually study long term memory by having
subjects attempt to recall aloud items from long lists. Because such a task is
different in important ways from the kinds of tasks long term memory is
usually called upon to perform, our findings are somewhat questionable (Klatsky,
1975).
You should first notice that in both of the above example paragraphs, the reference
was provided (Klatsky, 1975). This work is still the source of the ideas, even
if not directly quoted. (Ask your professor and/or visit this website for more
information about in text citations: Finding,
Reading and Citing Psychology Sources.)
The inappropriate paraphrase is not really the
student's own words, but rather just Klatsky's words rearranged a bit (with a few words
omitted). If you were to turn in a paper
containing this paragraph your professor would have been forced to level a
penalty (probably a fairly harsh penalty). It
should be apparent that a person could write such a paragraph without really
understanding the original paragraph at all.
The author of the appropriate
summary, on the other hand, must have understood Klatsky's original
paragraph. The meaning of that paragraph is captured in the summary,
but the words used to
express that meaning are the author's own. An appropriate summary
indicates to
the reader that the author understood the original material. Authors
should not
include material that they do not understand. Rosnow and Rosnow (1992)
refer to the
inclusion of material the author does not understand as "lazy
writing" (p.49).